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Developing each point

Lesson 29 of 41 in the Test Ninjas TOEFL course: Write an Email, Writing. In Write an Email, doing all three requirements is only the start.

Test Ninjas Research · Updated October 1, 2026
Lesson at a glance
DetailThis lesson
ModuleWrite an Email (Writing)
English focusExplaining with reasons, results and specific detail; polite proposals and requests (How about ‑ing, You could, I'd suggest ‑ing, Would you mind ‑ing, I'd appreciate it if you could) and softening them for a friend
Task skillDeveloping each requirement into point, specific detail and reason or next step, so the reader can act
TimeAbout 55 minutes
AccessIncluded in the TOEFL plan

What this lesson teaches

In Write an Email, doing all three requirements is only the start.

Each point also needs something the reader can use: a real moment, a concrete reason (a fact, and often a date or a number), or a proposal that says who does what, and when or how.

This lesson teaches the English for explaining (because, so, which means), for turning vague words into specific details, and for proposals and requests a friend can say yes to (How about ‑ing, Would you mind ‑ing, I’d appreciate it if you could).

Then it shows you how to develop each requirement into a short paragraph.

By the end of the lesson, you can

  1. Explain with a clear reason or result (because, since, so, which means, otherwise), and replace vague words (soon, fun, some problems, important) with a specific time, number, place or example.
  2. Make proposals and requests with the right pattern after each frame (How about ‑ing, What if we …, You could …, I’d suggest ‑ing, Would you mind ‑ing, I’d appreciate it if you could …, and by for deadlines), and soften them for a friend without hiding what you want.
  3. Develop each of the three requirements into a short paragraph (point → specific detail → reason or next step) that uses the situation’s facts, and end with a proposal the reader can accept.

What’s inside

Around the 3 teaching cycles below, the lesson opens with a quick check and closes with applied practice, a Check and a debrief. How every course lesson is built.

Teaching cycles in lesson 29
CycleFocusWhat it teachesDrills
Cycle 1EnglishExplaining with specific detail7
Cycle 2EnglishPolite proposals and requests7
Cycle 3Task skillDeveloping each requirement8

Word bank

The 10 words and phrases this lesson teaches. They come from the real course questions you practice on in the Apply step, so you meet each one again in context.

check in (about) phrasal verb

to contact someone briefly to ask how something is going

I just wanted to check in about Friday’s rehearsal: are we still starting at six?

Goes with:
check in about the schedule / check in with someone
Word family:
check in with (someone); a check-in (noun): a short conversation to see how things are going

make a big deal of idiom

to treat something as more serious than it really is

It was only a small typo on the flyer, so let’s not make a big deal of it.

Goes with:
make a big deal of / out of something
Word family:
a big deal (noun phrase): something important; no big deal: not important

due adjective

expected or required by a certain time

The library books are due back on March 3.

Goes with:
due on / by + a day
Word family:
due date (noun); overdue (adjective): late

pay back phrasal verb

to return money you borrowed

Thanks for getting my coffee; I’ll pay you back tomorrow.

Goes with:
pay someone back (for something)
Word family:
repay (verb, more formal); repayment (noun): money you pay back

a hit (with) noun phrase

something that people enjoy a lot

The quiz round about movie songs was a hit with the new members.

Goes with:
be a hit with someone
Word family:
hit (verb): to strike; a big hit (noun phrase): a great success

would rather (not) modal phrase

to prefer (not) to do something

I’d rather not decide tonight; can we talk tomorrow?

Goes with:
I’d rather + base verb / I’d rather not + base verb
Word family:
would prefer (to); rather than

transfer verb

to move money from one account to another

I’ll transfer the money for the pizza to you tonight.

Goes with:
transfer money (to someone / through an app) / transfer a file
Word family:
transfer (noun); transferable (adjective)

booking noun

an arrangement to have a table, room or seat kept for you

I made a booking for six at the noodle place near campus.

Goes with:
make / change / cancel a booking
Word family:
book (verb); booked (adjective): full; rebook (verb)

within preposition

before the end of a period of time

Please return the signed form within five days.

Goes with:
within a week / within two days
Word family:
within walking distance; within reach

work for (someone) verb phrase

to be a good time or arrangement for someone

Does Thursday at 4 work for you, or is Friday better?

Goes with:
work for you / if that works for you
Word family:
work out (phrasal verb): turn out well; workable (adjective)
The takeaway: Every point needs something the reader can use: a real moment, a concrete reason (a fact, and often a date or a number), or a proposal that says who does what, and when or how.
In the full course

Developing each point is part of the full TOEFL course

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More in Write an Email

  1. The task, the reader and the right tone
  2. Developing each point (this lesson)
  3. Seven minutes: plan, write, check

For how this task works on test day, see the Write an Email guide.

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